Camera
Positive
-good camera angles
-no shaking, steady
-piano solo good
-edit shots and piano shots vary
-a good variety of long, mid and close-up shots
-not overdone
Negative
-more shots of narrative
-boring narrative
-running shots don't make shots
Editing
Positive
-the fades and overlaps look well organized and placed intricately
-shots of Edd effective
-lots of cutaway's and fades
-smooth editing
Negative:
-too many overlaps, made the screen slightly opaque
Production Design
Positive
-nice setup in the studio (lights etc)
-kept the song instrumental based
-enjoyed performance
Negative
-the colours are different in the two setups
Narrative/Concept and Music Track
-not sure the story is understandable
-the visual styles don't match to the power of the song
-piano focus repetitive
-needs back story
-confusing narrative
